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The Beauty of Nature |
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
The Beauty of Nature Glittering crystal dewdrops Upon a golden leave Slowly drip upon wet soil Spider's web underneath A caterpillar changing Into a butterfly The perfect little wonder Takes off into the sky Weeping willow near the mere Graceful melancholy Swans seek shelter in its shade View of serenity Softly touched by gentle breeze An Eagle on its flight Precious glorious moment Before it gathers height Mountain peaks covered with snow Guardians of the world Majestic ancient solitude Watch Mother Earth unfurl Our nature of such beauty Enchanting elegance A sigh, almost a whisper Hypnotic life romance Munda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ This is beautifully rendered. 'Enchanting elegance' not only in nature - but in your words. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love the imagery in this Munda..very lovely! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Munda -This is wonderful, beautiful pictures created with your pen. Bonnie |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Munda, Yum! The part about the willow in the mere ... wow. Heck, the whole thing was great. More! More! Mike |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written Munda. Me likes. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a jewel of a poem just beautiful munda loved this one LOVELY jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is absolutely beautiful, Munda! I think I have to say this is my favorite of yours! Denise |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
simple in harmony with nature... i love the flow... if i have to talk like mike,then me loves. If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
simple in harmony with nature... i love the flow... if i have to talk like mike,then me loves. If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ahh, beautiful poem Munda! I enjoyed this one muchly Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Such a romantic poem! it made me feel different inside...i wish i knew how to write poems that did that..this has my vote! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Munda, Weeping willow near the mere Graceful melancholy Swans seek shelter in its shade View of serenity a beautiful poem. really enjoyed it. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Munda, This is really beautiful, the aesthetics about us found in nature if we but open our eyes! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Enchanting poem indeed!!! Munda, My regards to you, Sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Well done, Munda. Beautiful imagery and so uplifting. Pete |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What a beautiful, peaceful picture Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm overwhelmed by the number of responses. Thank you all very kindly. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I felt like I was there, and have to let out a sigh. Such a beautiful poem! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ooooh this was VUNDERBAR! ~H |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
*big smiles while voting* loved the read, beautiful poem |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautifully written. I love poems about nature Liz |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
M'friend, I love this poem, but you know you definitely have me hooked when you use the word "crystal." Wonder what Freud would think of that... woudl someone ask him??? |
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