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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA 
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Your vacant stare < !signature-->The painful silence Echoes through this empty void Love so beautiful You so vibrant All of it now destroyed You look at me With unseeing eyes How can you miss my pain Not one tear From eyes unblinking I cry and I cry in vain I took for granted You would always be Now I find myself alone So many things I should have said If only I could have known I profess too late My need for you No joy on your slackened face I'm left with naught But my misery In this cold dark silent place One more time I kiss your lips Unmoving unfeeling you lie I take your hand And lose my heart As I wish you one final goodbye... ~~~ In loving memory of Kari Aug 1965 - Mar 2000 I will always remember ~~~ Steven Seaman With arms wide open Now everything has changed I'll show you love I'll show you everything With arms wide open ~CREED [This message has been edited by sea_of_okc (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my. Crying now. Beautiful.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
steve-gator... you take my words with this emotional, sad but beautiful tribute... so i will just say im sorry,i understand ... and this is perfect choice to represent you in the book. later,kind-poet-gator jm |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A great poem. I'm sure she cherishes it where she is. I loved it. Mike |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Just wanted to stop in and say I understand your pain Hre's to hope in healing  All my love, Jeffrey |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
This is a very touching poem...i hope it goes in the book...wishing you lots of happiness... CJ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
So sad.. and so beautiful.. Great poem, good wishes to you for the tough times. Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
quite sad but beautifully written. take care. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
So sad but so beautifully written, I agree. Pete |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... good poetry. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very well done, sea.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
sea, So touching and sad. Always hard to say that finall good-bye. Wonderful writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*Sigh* wow this was a heart-mover good'un ~Heather |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this is so sincerely full of regret...lovely, sea. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I am really moved by this poem.. almost weeped, but suppressed. people often take for granted what they possess, and only feel the grief when they lose them.. Though I haven't any experience, I know if it ever happens to me, I would feel exactly like you once did.. it's the saddest poem i have found, true feeling.. a vote is well deserved. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh this gave me tears this one... what can I say other than that I am profoundly moved. K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Sea, this is very sad and so moving. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
sea, this is a very emotional poem.. and yes, as others put it, very sad and moving... regards, sudhir |
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