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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-06-23 12:53 PM

I thought a girl came in my life,
I looked again; it was an angel
an angel named ?
We started to talk,
I can feel my heart pumping faster
as we starting talking more
I can feel her every word piercing my heart
making a love mark,
She made me feel like a million dollars
She reached at the bottom of my heart where my hope is
she melted the walls of hate
She loved me for me, none other
a touch from her, got rid of all the pain
She is from heaven,
you ask how do I know?,
just look at her,
Every moment I spent with her felt as if I was living in paradise,
After meeting her, I do not need anything else,
She is everything to me,
those beautiful eyes, which look like gems,
those lips which are definitely made in heaven,
that smile which draws you to her,
That face, which I can never forget and neither will you,
I love you and I hope you can say the same,
for you I have written this poem,
There are just not enough words to describe you?

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Christopher J
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 94

1 posted 2000-06-23 07:55 AM

Man, i'm amazed..that's exactly my situation..to the dot...excellent poem, I hope your love is rewarded by love as well.

epoet
Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa

2 posted 2000-07-11 09:09 PM

whew, so touching. really good job, one thought of love is all the heart needs to survive. welcome to passions.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

3 posted 2000-07-12 05:37 AM

Xeonox.. Ah, you know when an angel enters your life, and you know that she's the one, this is what I feel too, and probably most other people who are deeply in love.. lovely poem.. if you can improve the poem a bit, by changing some of the verses, I will definitely vote for you..

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-07-12 05:46 AM

WOW intense stuff....Mmmmm me thinks you got it bad

Great poem...well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-07-24 01:26 AM

I have changed some of the vereses to make an impact but have not destroyed the original meaning of the poem.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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