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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beguiling belly, swaying hips, hands held high above her head face covered but for innocent eyes drawing you to her dancer’s bed. Body swaying to the music enticing thoughts, most lewd. Seducing your heart with a ripple, of her belly’s attitude. Lowering herself before you offering fantasies in her dance fingers drawing you closer to join her in romance. Then with a touch, it’s over your wife just broke the spell. You turn and smile and hope she won’t give you hell. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL you just couldnt be good the whole poem could you  jm |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
LOL funny funny! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Good one Sharon  enjoyed it muchly!! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's amazing how inconsiderate wives can be! Love it, deVine one |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
this is priceless LOL |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
This was great  I was really getting in the mood  then you slapped me back into reality at the end. Wonderful turn.Pete |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Smiling here... wonderful poem. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thanks for your replies. I guess humorous poetry is lagging in the replies for the book, I have a couple that may not be suitable, 'Bob's Big Boy' is one. This was the tamest of my humorous ones.  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Would it be worth it however??? Good turn at the end. Me thinks you hoodwinked everyone...lol jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
....Smiling away here....  regards sudhir |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Hubba hubba!!! oops, shhh don't tell anyone I said that Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Poet deVine ... loved the punchline! Thanks for the wonderful smiles! Best wishes, /Kit |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very clear I can see that guy had a dream, he dreamed of thee Only to discover He was the one that would suffer Because his wife would get rougher Did I spell this all ok, very nice little piece Sharon, just wonder where did you get the idea??? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Hehehehe....Sharon, ya done got my vote. Alicat |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
got mine too....this is cute |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL deVine. . . this is just too funny. . . You've captured this nicely!! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
My wife is a Belly Dancer...let the fantasy play on! ~~enjoyed reading this PdV, very creative!~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL Delightful, Sharon!! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
It's risen again Sharon..*g* HUSG |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are such a tease. You had me hooked and then the final verse. I thought we were going somewhere exotic and sensual.....aw - now I'n gonna pout..... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This brought smiles Thanks Liz |
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