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zArAThusTrA
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since 2000-06-21
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0 posted 2000-06-22 08:38 PM


erotica & clear plastic casings

baby leave me here to ponder my snapcase judgements & death from above. to think about touching you- dreams & i pray. smell of burning flesh and unbelievable passions, things unseen or felt. set me free from the tunnels of conformity, gray & black with no apparent anything. may my invisibility vanish & i'll kiss you on your lips of erotica. find our clear plastic casings punctured & twisted, broken & swallowed yet to become of something elementary to our basic needs & desires from eyes of unstoppable lust. something of boundless energy in forms of tainted humanity, live on & forth, in jilted disguise. perish only, my jaded eyes, in moments of rest & enlightenment. words & thought may fill this milkcrate void & opened unto some distortion of "reality". baby leave me here to conjure and accuse my ordered madness, strike & fade away as the last only yet to be replicated and sent into a whirl.


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Christopher J
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1 posted 2000-06-22 08:51 PM


Yeah, i liked it..great to see that you haven't just followed the same old line by line format.
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-07-01 06:16 PM


Z.,
This made me smile. I really enjoyed this. And you've only done 4 posts? Let's get goin'!

Mike

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