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Gingerlily and Coconut |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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I stepped outside and time slowed to a hazy heat wave slow too hot to move kind of crawl The crystal blue sky winked down at my slightly upturned face Innocence recaptured in a moment... From above the sun saw a cherub smiling slightly with the barest glint of smokey green slivered eyes winking back in that knowing sort of way Sweetly soft cradling sunlight Heat rained down saturating white cotton t-shirt and faded denim Raising goose-bumps on milky white skin And I shivered As sweetly felt heard spoken Lightly touched thoughts of you, my secret love Drift floated languidly by on scents of a gingerlily and coconut afternoon What a lovely day it turned out to be |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
God! I love this poem!  *sigh* ~Heather (checking vote box 19 times) |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey can you do that vote 19 times????? lolol...well if you can this poems got 38 votes....great images, great poem  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sigh. Yep. A lot. Bunches of lots. I love this I do. First time. Second. Third and fourth. And hell, you can't beat a title like that. Yep. C. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Mmmmmmmmmm certainly does sound like a lovely day Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah!!! Wonderful...I'd like to have a moment of silence please as I click this vote button!!! Nice...so nice Nicole!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So lovely! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Nic - this is beautiful... voted! K~Sleeping Beauty never knew how lucky she really was~ (Me) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Satiate, what you do! Great title, wonderful context...[vote, vote, vote] Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I simply love this poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is beautiful Satiate! voting.My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
The title blew me away, in fact what followed was even better...great work, hope to read more of yours! |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Umm.... wowsers... loved this! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Many praises from here as well. ~nice writing~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh oh oh, voting here, I loved this exceptional poem, yes it needs be in the book |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Found this little gem hiding away, I love this!!! Gotta love that knowing wink.... gotta love the whole thing. Beautiful poem. Bonnie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Can't believe I almost missed this one! Satiate, this is wonderful writing....very impressive. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Thank you all very very much, for such wonderful replies! Hugs! Nicole |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sounds like a wonderful day! Well written Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...fantastic piece, so descriptive that I could see it and smell it...wonderful job it's not often that a poem is that descriptive...you've done well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Yes of course... this is a beauty.... regards, sudhir |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
It is with much pleasure that I cast my vote for this! Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! Debbie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ This is simply a delicate morsel - savored with great delight ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poetry. enjoyed very much. voted. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Nikky, ya done got my vote. I liked this one immensely the first time I read it, and the many times I'd go back to read it. Again, wonderful job. Alicat |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yes, I know... I'm shameless... *bump* |
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