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since 1999-06-20Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise
Shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise
relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies
casting a relative design in honor of respect
for the individual who gives off such an effect
Relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies
silhouettes dance among other's smiling eyes
a shadow it seems was her only will to reflect
till happiness offered her the beauty to connect
Casting a relative design in honor of respect
now presenting a much more posed subject
before she believed in the sweet simple lies
dropped into her mind by sweet talking guys
For the individual who gives off such an effect
her evening shadows have come to perfect
that within the beauty of self if one complies
shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise
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since 2000-01-22Posts 18554
this is beautiful
some words were born for poetry
shadows and Silhouettes being two
since 1999-06-05Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
Beautiful words, dreamer. one vote here....
since 1999-08-22Posts 22648
One of your best, Gloria!
since 1999-11-06Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
Enjoyed this render.
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
since 1999-06-05Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
It's a shame it's pouring with rain here or I'd go out and look at some silhouettes in disguise right now
"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.
Not A Poet
since 1999-11-03Posts 3885
Great idea, shadows and silhouettes. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme and repetition very much.
since 1999-06-18Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
Great piece of poetry... I realy enjoyed this!
"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon
since 1999-11-07Posts 1521
I never thought of it that way!
since 2000-01-06Posts 964
"shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise"
My favorite part, I always wonder what it looks like within the light
The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.
since 2000-02-16Posts 2637
Hi Lost Dreamer,
This is wonderful so much enjoyed.
Thank you, Cerenity
since 2000-06-26Posts 3168
And if shadows could have their own silhouettes would they then have the need to try?..
A very nice, calming piece.
Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".
since 2000-01-18Posts 4713
What wonderful writings here...shadows are silhouettes in disguise..just the title alone makes for a wonderful image
Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
Dennis L. White
since 2000-02-17Posts 1463
You keep writing this fantastic and Ron will have to devote a whole chapter of the Book just for you! I really liked this!
since 1999-08-22Posts 22648
I wish I could vote for this one again, Gloria! Absolutely beautiful!
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