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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise Shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies casting a relative design in honor of respect for the individual who gives off such an effect Relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies silhouettes dance among other's smiling eyes a shadow it seems was her only will to reflect till happiness offered her the beauty to connect Casting a relative design in honor of respect now presenting a much more posed subject before she believed in the sweet simple lies dropped into her mind by sweet talking guys For the individual who gives off such an effect her evening shadows have come to perfect that within the beauty of self if one complies shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is beautiful some words were born for poetry shadows and Silhouettes being two jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful words, dreamer. one vote here.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of your best, Gloria!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Enjoyed this render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
It's a shame it's pouring with rain here or I'd go out and look at some silhouettes in disguise right now Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Great idea, shadows and silhouettes. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme and repetition very much. Pete |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great piece of poetry... I realy enjoyed this! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I never thought of it that way!  Kewl! ~Heather |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
"shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise" My favorite part, I always wonder what it looks like within the light Thanks, beautiful The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lost Dreamer, This is wonderful so much enjoyed. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
And if shadows could have their own silhouettes would they then have the need to try?.. A very nice, calming piece. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LD~ What wonderful writings here...shadows are silhouettes in disguise..just the title alone makes for a wonderful image well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, You keep writing this fantastic and Ron will have to devote a whole chapter of the Book just for you! I really liked this! Dennis :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I wish I could vote for this one again, Gloria! Absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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