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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Lost in a Time Here I am, back again Lost in a time of love and pain This time repeats, repeats when When I'm here, here again Deep in love, love again Making love as much as I can This love I'm giving, giving when When I'm in love, love again Now you're leaving, leaving again Left alone in the poring rain This pain is hurting, hurting when When I'm in pain, pain again Here I am, back again Lost in a time of love and pain This time repeats, repeats when When I'm here, here again Deep in love, love again... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ this is GREAT! I understand it well.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I understand this well *sigh* ~Heather |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is GREAT!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Lovely poem... very lovely... and wonderfully done! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh how well i know.. EXCELLENT poem... it does feel this way dont it jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good poem, insect. Excellent style to showcase good words. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SEA…Thank you… SEA…Thank you…SEA… X Angel…Thank you..I hope your at the deep part! Justbleu…Thank you Bridgette glad you liked this a lot. Dawn Eclipse…Thank you for the wonderful reply! Janet Marie…Thank you very much! You are one busy poet! Balladeer…Thank you 4 your reply! I am very happy with this poem. During the creation it was a little bit confusing at times. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
The "love thing".... happy? sad? all jumbled up together? Whatever it is, it's wonderful Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!!! You express the emotion so stylishly!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Here, here I'm sending this poem up, up to be viewed, viewed again. Excellent job! [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
insect, very good, two thumbs up..... Parker |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Here you are back again Writing a great one once again Amused with your last one, then just then Here you are back again Posting a new one once again So here I am once again Posting my reply to you my friend To tell you it's a great one once again Waiting for your next one, wondering when Until that time and only then I'll be back once again LOL That was great insect! I loved it! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Eric Williams…Thank you Eric for the "reply thing" it's wonderful of you so thank you Eric for the "reply thing" it's wonderful of you so thank you Eric Williams… ESP…Thank you for a rolling smile, rolling smile back Love and hugs Lizzie sends, insect sends them back Extra Smile Post so beautifully, beautiful ESP Thank you Lizzie (ESP) you put a smile on me Esmeralda Ponsonby…Thanks for sending this up, sent up To be viewed up at the top, topped up Thanks again you’re an excellent friend Haleyja…Some thanks for the thumbs, thumbs up Some thumbs thanks, some up thanks Something thumbed up by thanks… kat…kat, oh kat you pussy kat I pat your back, pussy kat I feed you poems, poetry back When you reply, replying back You are my friend, friendly kat I love you my dear pussy kat |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey this is so cool! Love it.. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I've been to that lost time as well enjoyed the read...well done ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lost in a time---must have been to scroll by this---making up for lost time now, tho. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Severn…This poem so cool, cool poem So cool of a poem from you A temperature metaphor expressed Expression of coolness expressed so cool tracie66…Enjoying the poem to read, enjoyable read Just as well we've been lost in a time Just as were lost in time, we've lost time Were lost in a time of lost time, losing time Losing more time in Lost in a Time serenity…Scroll with time, scrolling time Tho you've made up time Scrolled to this Lost in a Time, scroll of lost time Lost in a Time making time for a scroll making up lost time Thanks everyone for responding (Gotta catch my breath) |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Hi, Incect.. Nice expression of lost love.. Really enjoyed it.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
jamesjiao…A poem with lost love, lost love poem Also a poem of falling in love Repeating of lost and falling in love, falling in lost love Losing a love, you can fall in love, again you may fall in a loss of love A poem of a time of losing love, lost love A poem of a time to fall in love, falling in love Falling in this poem lost in a time |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I am astonished by your ability to repeat words in a poem and yet repeating it so effectively, I had to read the same stanza twice before I could get it.. hehe, hope to see more of this type of poems from you soon! - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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