Open Poetry #9 |
I Think I Like You |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Do you like the rain in your face? Do you like to be vulnerable? Always so smooth and cool.... Do I have a chance to get to know you? I need to know Do you like making angels in the snow? Skinny dipping in the rain? Or are you just a little bit shy? I hope you've got the time... Do you want what I want? Do you like to be totally excited? Have we got anything in common? I've saved every letter... they just keep getting better And I think I like you liking you more and more each day and I think I need to get to know you better than just like this and I need to know what would happen If we kissed Your words speak to me Who's this guy? Who are you? Taking you with me when I sleep I don't want to scare you off I can get a little deep Just a picture of a man with deep dark eyes Is it imaginary confidence? Or do I really like this guy? So far a vision in my mind Wonder what his voice would sound like If he whispered in my ear Would his breath give me shivers down my spine Seems of late the only thing on my mind I think I'd like to find the time And I've saved every letter... they just keep getting better And I think I like you liking you more and more each day and I think I need to get to know you better than just like this and I need to know what would happen If we kissed Julie :) |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
personally...i love the rain! but that's just me... i'm sure that kissing this guy would be pretty nice since you're obviously thinking about it... follow your dreams, girl! Tony |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi JulieAnn, Yes, yes, yes, to everything!!!!! How precious you write and put your thoughts into this poem. I did like what I read. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
JulieAnn Go for it girl! You certainly have a way with words. Great job. didi |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
JulieAnn... I must say, you really know how to push all those little buttons!!! Wow... beautiful, intruiging, alluring. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Tony~~thank you for that bit of advice...if it wasn't for the distance....who knows... Bill~~that is sweet of you....thank you for reading...glad you enjoyd it... Thank you DiDi...Just something I wrote for someone I have been in contact with recently....I hope he liked it since I am sure he read it.... Thunderkyss~~Little buttons??....i guess it is working then....Thank you so much... Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...dont know how I missed this the first time thru but I am glad I found it today....nice write here |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I know I like your writing,...in fact, I think it's great. What a read! Thanks. *Peace. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Great job!!! This was fun to read!!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Paula~~Thanks for reading.....and thank you for your kind reply.... Spitfire~I am gald you like my writing....and thank you for reading.... jaimie~~Thank you it was kind of fun to write too.....thanks for reading!! |
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