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Poetic Peace |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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(this is a tad 'off' for me, please bear with me, I was in an 'off' mood when I wrote this!) our love grows in sweet abandon here wild and free as a summer storm passioned by thunder fueled by lightening a kinetic melding of spirits in a garden of sparks and light shattered not once but twice by life's eerie turns but yet, driven on by unknown need it grows stronger ever still showering down in masses of colour and sound to come to rest in a sweet repose on print weary eyes and ears while jaded senses revel in new found surround as frozen heart warms and blossoms anew in a gentle garden of poetic peace |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am so enjoying today...this is nice...thoughtful but not without tumult, like a child spinning circles...excellent... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
H - this is good work! I know how you feel about off days..and others can't understand WHY you feel that way about a piece of work. But, we all know our own styles...lol...been there.\ All of those poems - go into the My Documents folder - with an 'In Progress' at the end of them...hehe  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn, and remembered that it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From J |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Heather! Doesn't seem 'off' to me at all! Denise |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Seems ok to me ya dork  *big hugs* Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Heather, knowing your trials and errors, it warms my heart to know you have found a modicum of reconciliation. This one ain't 'off' at all...it's right on target. And I loved the imagery: powerful naturistic bent. Alicat btw, would you be so kind as to ping me via ICQ? I'm having to rebuild my list yet again.  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Well, well, well...I did get a sort of respite writing this Thanks all for your replies...it made me feel better about this odd piece I wrote last night.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, ok, I'll bare with you this one last time.... |
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