Open Poetry #9 |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The point at which all lines converge I grip within this hand Where past and present tend to merge that I may understand Of deeds great men and fools alike did countless times before I see for whom the clock now strikes that I choose to ignore As stealing time spent otherwise on more important things I script words into butterflies to watch as they take wing and not think one clock-tick mis-spent that's filled instead with wonderment [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Doc.... I think this is magnificent!!!!!!!!!!! "I script words into butterflies to watch as they take wing....." Thank you for adding this to my day...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is wonderful Dr Moose ![]() ![]() |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunny1 , and Dark Angel , To bring the day and night together , I must have done something right ! Thanks ... Doc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wooohooo!! I love this, Dr. Moose! Fantastic! Denise |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
d, Haven't been around much lately , always good to hear from you . Thanks , Doc |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ Wonderful thoughts here ... 'The point at which all lines converge I grip within this hand Where past and present tend to merge that I may understand' Always a pleasure ..... ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hey hey Doc! You stealing watches again? Pick me up a Rolex or two would ya. All the same... these be some damn fine lines. I raise my pen to you and yours. Peace! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed your poetic decision making. Very nicely put together. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge , And here all along I thought the pleasure was mine ( and still do ). Glad you liked , Doc Drew , Nope , only the ones that don't belong to me. A Rolex eh ? will have to see what I can come up with . Doc Claire , I'm glad you enjoyed , sometimes it's hard to tell who inspired what , but I have always found your works to be inspirational. Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The title drew me in Doc, and the rest was just plain truth....so tell me, are you accepting any new patients? Thank you for this thoughtful read.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew from the title I would love the verse! Great! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, Thank you . I'm afraid my practice will never make me perfect , but then again who wants to be ? Sunshine, Oh those pesky little titles , there you are just cruising along , when all of a sudden , one reaches right out and grabs ya ! Thanks am glad you enjoyed . Doc |
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