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The Time Has Come. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The time has come gentle maiden For this Knight to lay aside his sword I have battled long and hard And my body grows weary my arms are tired my heart seeks solace my soul longs to rest I have travelled night and day I have seen thy face in the sun And thy eyes in the stars Longing to touch thy cheek to hold thy hand to feel thy arms to caress thy lips Hold me close now gentle maiden Speak to me thy words, calming and tender Take my heart into thy hands My body in your arms my eyes to yours my hands to thine my love to thee -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
what a tender tale you do tell never say never |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely Sven....a true knightly poem!  |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Oooh...touching and holding and laying aside your sword. All that good stuff here.  Lovely poem Gossamerwings |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ *Sighing* here. How lovingly tender. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my sweet Knight, how I've awaited your return home to my passion and my hearth So now rest ye in my arms seek my heart for solace complete Tend will I your soul your hand to rest in mine my arms will enwrap you as my lips to yours shall meet and you shall dwell in my eyes as our hands will clasp and in our love we shall rejoice and you shall not weary of your days to come here in your home here in my heart here in my eyes O my love, Welcome home, good Sir. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
WHAT!!!!!!! Excuse me but being a Knight is not just a day job you know!!!!!!! LOL Poor Sir Sven, you have swooned through many a battle. Rest my friend and fight another day. Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A delightfully tender and romantic verse Sven ... simply superb!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely read sven...enjoyed this. jwesley |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful Sir Knight!! I only hope this Knight finds his beautiful maiden and protects her and their kingdom always.. *sigh* full of longing and magic.. a special combination.. Great stuff as always! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, Sir Sven! This is wonderful! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Paula, a tale from the heart. . . thank you. . . deVine, thank you my lady. . . I salute you. . . Gossamer, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed... Marge, I hear you. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, if you keep writing like that, I may have to ride my steed to where you are my Lady. . . thank you so much. . . Marina, yes, I am tired. . . thank you for your words my friend. . . Kit, thank you so much. . . jwesley, thank you also!! Isis, ah my friend. . . thank you. . . that combination is just what I was looking for! TA, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
AHHHHH....What else can I say that hasn't been already said??? Lovely..... Julie :) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I agree with everyone above!! you are such a tender heart. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a beautiful, beautiful piece ((sigh)) Touching Love Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JulieAnn, thank you!! poutprincess, thank you also. . . my heart is all I have. . . Tracie, thank you my friend. . . your sigh speaks a thousand words. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"My body in your arms my eyes to yours my hands to thine my love to thee" Count me in as a sigh~er, Sire... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So beautiful and romantic Sven, well done |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't think all of the lovely ladies in Passions have seen this yet...so a little boost back up to where it belongs... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Sven, I have read this one several times, it is so lovingly written and giving of yourself (to her). Sigh...boyoboy, if you were about thrity years older you could make some grannies hearts skip beats with this love poem for sure. Well done and good luck, hope she comes back so we can continue reading your love poems. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I agree after all that wandering and all those battles it is time for some love sweet love...James |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
Oh, to be the fair maiden of Sven.... (swooning) Very nicely done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you to everyone that has replied. . . And thanks to Sunshine for bringing it back!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
It had just the right feeling and touch please continue Sir Knight. |
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