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Wildheart
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Wildheart |
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guiliano New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8new york city |
Wildheart* wildheart beating breathing down on me your wild soul roaming your tenderness aching the wilderness in me your sweet echoed essence smothers my wild wide eyes wildheart breaking slow dance your river soul inside my so tired wallowing mind you make me come alive with your heated sensual sighs your wild broken heart accept my tender hands caress wildheart wildfire passions desire search inside my Kiss* discover its arrows aim straight to your pursed pouty lips together our wilderness blazes a smoldering fire, glowing hot embers, burn thru on each other's bliss wildheart*, ask me what drives me wild most about you* it is your wildheart soft innocence in a natural girl so honest so true, your wild innocence has unraveled my skin wildheart* I feel like before I am now I was you* "Takes it easy, baby Take it as it comes Don't move too fast And you want your love to last Oh, you've been movin' much too fast"=(The Doors) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is excellent work... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
guiliano.... Truly beautiful, very romantic and written with expertise!!!! Very, Very nice!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your sweet echoed essence smothers my wild wide eyes wildheart breaking slow dance your river soul inside my so tired wallowing mind you make me come alive with your heated sensual sighs your wild broken heart accept my tender hands caress wildheart wildfire passions desire search inside my Kiss* discover its arrows aim straight to your pursed pouty lips together our wilderness blazes a smoldering fire, glowing hot embers, burn thru on each other's bliss wildheart*, ask me what drives me wild most about you* it is your wildheart soft innocence in a natural girl so honest so true, your wild innocence has unraveled my skin wildheart* I feel like before I am now I was you* ======================== this is stunning and breathtaking... sensual and lovely in its emotions and imagery wonderful writing... superb poetry take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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