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Stars Crossed |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Within velvet tips of finger’s caress, I grant thee my wavering soul. Beyond echoes of breath upon skin, A kiss seals me to the heaven I hold… Jubilance is mine, as you are my wake, To the tenderness of gallant display- When sensation proves sweeter by minute, I shall conquer, mayhap, I shall pray… Betwixt conscience and bewildered heart- I seek guidance from within thine embrace, Shall I coast tender waves without knowing? Bleeding open to you, very well my disgrace… As destined are we both to another- Still our stars cross in mystical light, Glittering yet, one last stoical tear- To forge beneath perilous night… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
As destined are we both to another- Still our stars cross in mystical light, Glittering yet, one last stoical tear- To forge beneath perilous night… .... WOW WOW and a million more WOWs... Devina, its been some time since I last read your poetry... and it seems that it was worth waiting... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ I must have 'blinked' .... wouldn't miss your far-too-infrequent post for the world. 'Within velvet tips of finger’s caress, I grant thee my wavering soul.' Love these lines ..... Come visit more often, hon. I miss ya' !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work! "Betwixt conscience and bewildered heart, shall I coast tender waves without knowing bleeding open to you, very well my disgrace." These are deep and tender words of yearning for fulfillment in a hopeless situation.... Good writing! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Betwixt conscience and bewildered heart-" Love that line Devina. . . and I would tell you that it gets easier. . . but you know better than that. . .  Wonderful. . .as always. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Devina, this has got to be one of the most beautiful poems of yours I've ever read. Sad in a way, but breathlessly beautiful nonetheless...You haven't been posting much I see, had to DIG for this one! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sudhir- Your compliments always humble me, my dear friend...I thank you!!! Marge- Hey sweets...is that a hint or a lecture there?? hmmm??? G* Miss you too!!! ethome-Well it's more like a major crossroad in my life right now...but you KNOW what I mean!! TY Sven- at least you're being honest hun...that's what always counts! Have I mention lately how grateful I am to have a friend such as you? NOW you know!! Gen- I have to make you work for it dearie!! Glad to see you back around!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and did they cross indeed! The stars, I mean., how lovely. Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always known Devina. . . And I'm grateful to have you as a friend too!!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Just a plea from those of us who MISS you !  If I'm 'lecturing' ... you'll know it !  Love ya' gal ....  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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