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Masterpiece Of You
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Masterpiece Of You I want to paint the canvas in hues of our love, trickles of dancing colors blending their way creating an impression of deepest emotions. Inside my soul, rainbows capture small dreams dressing them with tender scenes to uncover, my heart a bountiful playground for attention. I'm drawn away within a kaleidoscopes vision, a taste of destiny's sweetest summer pleasure before my eyes tempting my palette with delight. Each day another brilliant hue becomes visible as my mind creates this masterpiece of you, where soon within time this painting will be framed. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I want to paint the canvas in hues of our love," Lost Dreamer, what a beautiful first line. Such an imaginative theme, this masterpiece of yours. The rest of the poem is just as sweet...just that the first line was perfect with which to lead the reader forward. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gloria this is exquisite! I love every word of it! It captured my attention and left me in a kaleidoscope of awe!   <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh How I enjoyed this. This was such a pleasing read. I am so glad I came here, your sweet words have left me admiration. You have written a very beautiful poem indeed. Jenn E |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think I have a new favorite of yours, Gloria...nope, I'm sure of it! Very very beautiful! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What beautiful expressions of love in your picture images of this person. Very well done! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
gloria, the poetic voice of a woman with much love to share is so very clear here... your writing gets better and better... LOVE the interior rhyme in these two lines: "Inside my soul, rainbows capture small dreams dressing them with tender scenes to uncover" this line is FABULOUS: "I'm drawn away within a kaleidoscopes vision" wonderful romantic verse, my friend! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
what a beautiful picture you have painted. Each image is colourful and dazzling. perfect poem. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
what a beautiful palette you paint with |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"My mind creates this masterpiece of you"... Nice, Gloria - this is a beautiful poem... Our minds are capable of wondrous art, aren't they? |
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