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The love we're in
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The love we're in |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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Underneath there wasn't much just some memories and dust inside my was heart was unused abandoned and abused I left it there to it's own devices close the door and never minded little did I know the wind was about to blow Like a breeze, soft and easy like a hurricane off the coast a breath of sweet sensation across my soul like the wind, never ceasing pushing me to the point of dreaming i couldn't resist the power you made and your love blew me away When the air settled down I got up and looked around nothing looked the same like after a cool spring rain I'll never forget the way you said I'm so happy that we met I wasn't even looking then now look at all the love we're in *******dedicated to the man so close to my heart, words will just never be enough................ [This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
This was beautiful. I hope this man knows the intensity I can sense behind your words. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
From you lips to god's ears, yes I hope he knows too  Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
MY GOD....how perfect this is to tell the woman in my life how I feel....you are so right, words are not enough sometimes This is excellent Kay-lynn |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so lovely I just cant find the words to say |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely. I had a chance to hear you sing (on the 'net) and you have a lovely voice!  |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Poet Devine has heard my voice?? omggg.. Thank you all for the lovely comments. Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is stunning, I truly love it., it's heartfelt and sincere. Kathleen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A sweet expression in poetry you share. "I left it there to its own devices closed the door and neverminded little did I know the wind was about to blow"... RED, this verse alone says it all! Lovely read =) Coco =) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a very lovely a flowing piece full of tenderness and love. Where can we hear your voice? Liz |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Liz.....got to www.mp3.com/kaylynn |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thanks Jeffrey. Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Good Poem here. But I must say that I am blown away,,just listened to "pray for rain"....Fantastic! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you Jamie!Pray for Rain was written by me and my co-writer Graham Andrews. He lives in England and we co-wrote all 3 of those songs and he also made the music tracks single handedly. I added vocals here in Nashville. Took awhile to get them done, but Im sure happy you liked "pray for rain" (smile) Kay-lynn www.mp3.com/kaylynn Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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