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She Waits
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She Waits |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Quietly she sat in her finest lace softly touching her powered face she touched the satin ribbons in her hair wondering if he really cared Watching the candle burn she touched the single rose pressed in a book she needed to take one last look longing to feel his tender kiss she traced her lips with her fingertip As the candle burns low she swallows her tears seems she's waited a thousand years slowly she pulls the ribbons from her hair fallen lace everywhere she sank to the floor in dispair where naked she lay clutching the rose in her hand dried petals everywhere softly she weeps waiting for sleep BloomingRose |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
mental pictures of 'delta dawn' come to mind - but your portrait - is far more tender and touching - beautifully done BR |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Oh, how delicately adorned is your verse. Just splendid. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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