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Your Eyes
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Your smile sits so inviting on your strong and handsome face.. Your hair is perfectly in sync, Not one strand out of place.. You truly have an image that is honest, I surmise.. I only find one tiny flaw: Your glasses hide your eyes! I'm not complaining, heaven knows, for I wear glasses, too.. And though you've told me, and I know, Your eyes are softest blue.. I'm cursed with curiosity...a female trait, I'm told.. I'd like to look into your eyes, And down into your soul.... I'd like to see the spark ignite, When emerald eyes meet blue.. And when your passion rises, do they change to deeper hue? Do you close your eyes when kissing lips a sweet goodnight? Or do you watch your love's effect, uncloak in sheer delight? Just some simple questions asked, to satisfy my mind.. I think that you are special, quite romantically inclined.. When next you see your image in your mirror, I will, too.. Across the miles, My eyes will smile, Into your eyes of blue.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Across the miles, My eyes will smile, Into your eyes of blue.... ----- Excellent expression... your works are always a treat to read... regards, sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
oh great Sunny1 - gulp - how didyou know I wear glasses? And my eyes are blue, too *whew, is it getting warm in here???* This is very good - it hit me hard, lady - whew! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sudhir.... I am glad that I can put a smile on your face when you read! I feel the same about yours! Thank you..... Hi LngJhnAg.... I thought you would be wearing a patch!! I'm glad that you stopped by....I don't know many pirates!! Thank you also!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
I will, too.. Across the miles, My eyes will smile, Into your eyes of blue... nice touch Sunny1 ... good read ... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi MA Miller... Thank you for stopping by to read and reply.......I love the input, or as I call it: RnR!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is gorgeous, Sunny! Yet another beautfully romantic work. They just keep getting better and better. Michael |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Auguste.. Oh, I'm glad to see that you liked this one, and also glad to see that you chose the paint icon for your own. You are quite the artist yourself, and for your thoughtful words, I thank you!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh that is so lovely, Sunny as always your poetry is beautiful. Thank you I need some smiles and this gave me a soft gentle remembering one.  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Those were contacts...my eyes when not red; are brown....lol Lovely poem again and again and again and again.......... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marsha.. Anytime I can help you smile, I'll consider it an honor! Thank you and I'm glad you liked it.. Hi Jamie.. Ah...love those contacts!! I wear 'em, too! Now you can change eye color to match your outfit! Is not anything in the world real anymore? Thank you, my partner in rhyme!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
LOL--shining1-- I was being facetious...hehe These tired brown eyes still see in 20-10 Sorry for the misunderstanding Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Reachig across the miles and around the globe. You are really traveling lately in your works. Wonderfully written and a spark of desire lies within.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark... I have gypsy blood in my veins, so I just gotta move on! Thank you for your RnR!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is so cool, has the longing, and the humor, and the romanticism. Our song for the men so far away catalinamoon |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon... I kindof thought that you might like this one......and yes, I agree. Good to see you here!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you inspired a Cinquain with this wonderful poem: Your Eyes Your eyes I see with love I'm lost in their embrace Forever craving all you are I'm yours |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes very nice writing and desires...I was looking into Lena's eyes earlier tonight with fascination...she told me to look into her eyes and see how she feels about me. James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wilfred..... The Cinquain was lovely, and I thank you!! James..... Lena was right....the eyes are the windows to the soul.... Thank you, also! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl I swear we were twins in another life...you always write my heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A'hhh Sunny, you write with tenderness in your heart, with passion from your being, and with desire in your eyes. Yes indeed, poems of yours have touched me, and you are a talent in your own right. I haven't been on for awhile, as I have been very busy, and I am very glad I came by today. Thanks Sunny. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Paula.... I think so, also....maybe we still are, have just been seperated from birth!!!!!! Thank you, twin, for sharing your heart with me!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
HBi Bill.... Good to see you stop by, and I am sincerely glad that you liked this! It did come from the heart, but that's only because I have friends like you to inspire me... Once again, thank you, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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