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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Control Hate: born in honor of dignity Set in a hellish symphony Acoustics sound in levels high Compound with no good reason why Open doors bring me in Destined: to out weigh the best of men Crowned with glorious gem’s and jewels Set to make the biggest fools In blood soaked cloak I wash my hands Prefix of all mortal men In sand and stone my deeds be cast It is I who will not be the last Come when called so many said As I reach in side their screaming heads And found with in the pit of them The worst and last of all that’s grim I call no rest from which I choose It is I who will not loose In a million years I’ll still stand tall For it is I: who knows it all They cry and plead for me to come But I play with them and have my fun I’ll stand and wait till all is rot And some: I answer not They believe to beckon me Gives them strength and dignity As I bring forth my sheathing sword Make way with them, their just reward I am the fire that burns the skin I am the shadow’s leaking in I am the reason souls are lost I call your name to final cost Yet in solitude in pities cry On me it is they all rely A beast of inner selfish right A blast of hell in darkened night It is I who makes your blood run cold I am, I am your lost control © tori August 2000 < !signature--> If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm [This message has been edited by tori (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love that last stanza Tori! Given ya the chills....ooooh! Love ya girl!!  |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks so much girl.. love ya too...;-) If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am the fire that burns ths skin....WOW...liked this muchly |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thank you so much Paula  If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tori- This is so wonderfully presented...flows well and captures one from the beginning. Loved it...psst check your title. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thanks Mark glad you like this one.... oopps thanks I'll fix that...  If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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