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Response to Sunshine's Ocean Memories...
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Response to Sunshine's Ocean Memories... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Thanks, Karilea for the inspiration ~ No titles so far so I will call it "Ocean Memories: The retake" better ideas are ever so welcome! lingering reminders of yesterday's salted tastes a simple kiss an innocent kiss souls flew high, fluttered by new-born wings eyes died into the depths of one another postcarded emotions of salinated memories emote remnant thoughts of existence alone remote solitary drop of water alienated from the ocean a t e a r d r o p . . . P.S. I am sorry for "flooding the forum" today with three poems already... but I am rather inspired today... by Christopher and Sunshine (Karilea)... Also I will be sort of away from the forums the next 3/4 days (a side trip to the world exposition at Hannover, Germany will be capturing my mind). I wish you all well. PASSIONS RULES! my regards Sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Inspiration added with your perpiration have made for some great poetic offerings Sudhir. This is another. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I comply with Prometheus' response. Well done, Sudhir...far and away the better piece. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Never apologize for being inspired. Especially when it turns to this. She is a wonderful inspiration and you have honored greatly with your retake. Enjoy the weekend and we will be here waiting for you when you get back.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jamie, Thanks as always for your supporting words... Karilea, better... no, at par maybe, but not better... Thanks for the inspiration as always... and this is not the first time that I have been inspired by your splendid writings... Mark, Thanks for your kind words and for your well-wishes... Indeed I had an excellent weekend... I just had a tremendous urge to check up on what's happening here that even when the clock shows 17 minutes past midnight and after two tiring (for the feet) days of walk around the World exposition, I still felt motivated to look upon the site... Truly my second family... regards to you all, a bleary-eyed sleepy, sudhir...  |
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