Open Poetry #9 |
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Last Sunrise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
The Last Sunrise By: Tori Hoiser In darkened waste it now remains Forgotten like a drop of rain Sitting on a memory shelf Alone and sadden by its self It comes to call with out request Like a stain that lands upon the vest And marks the spot it once upheld Night filled with fire, straight from hell As birds flew out of shadowed tree’s I can feel the coldness from the breeze That chill that drew me in your arms A sight that seems to linger on Hidden deep with in my soul Flooded vision takes control As I fight its entrance with all my might I cannot alter from this sight When fire burn the last of night In the distance I see it rage As it danced for us upon the stage Its flames blending into the sky In the still of a quiet lullaby As gull’s sang out the song of blue The fire lifted in wake of new Into the sky its flames set free And all that was; were you and me Or so I thought when I was young Back before my life begun That when you held me by your side We would greet each new tide Now it comes with out request Like that spot that lands upon the vest And fill’s my mind a blue venue Of the last sunrise spent with you ©tori June 2000 |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Great work, Tori. I enjoyed reading it. Nice memories with a touch of pain. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice poem, it flowed really well ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori this is AWESOME! You've written some great verse here girl! I'm glad to see you posted something finally ![]() Love ya ~HUGS~ |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Lake, and Rebeca... love you too girl ![]() If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awesome indeed Tori, loved it. Wonderful writing ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tori This really touched me. Seems I have been there before. BloomingRose |
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