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Becoming Invisible
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Becoming Invisible |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
The appearance here is minimal Brief, for all it tries to be Pretending while becoming transparent Yet everyone still allowed to see The portrayal, while temporary, Is thus all the more adored And infinite in its grace Where each memory is stored Time and space does not exist Compared to the absolute One can’t buy what one cannot barter This, the eternal truth Gradually all things are lost And faded from mortal eyes Like water between the hands Like death even, when we die Pointless in the end of it all Making life less miserable I feel as if a rumor of a whole As I am becoming, invisible |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
PoeticKnight.... I really enjoyed reading this poem, and have many times felt as though I was 'invisible'. This is great writing, and I also wanted to say..... "Welcome to Passions" I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions and instead of becoming invisable, stay a while and be seen and heard  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions  I really liked this poem, it flowed well for me and I liked the feel of it. I can't wait to read more of your poems! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank ya'll so much. I hope I am being seen...*S* I think I will stay awhile. |
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