Open Poetry #9 |
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Carved Through Time |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Mist rises from the tumbling water, Dusting pines with shimmering grace, Stripes of colors in pastel arcs, All disappear at the waterfall's base. On the trestle off in the distance, An iron horse breathes spires of steam, Walls of the chasm carved through all time, Form a frame for this perfect scene. Standing amidst all of this wonder, Undisturbed here by the progress of man, In awe of this natural beauty, I slowly drink in all I can. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is poetry! This is great! WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW regards to you Bonnie, Sudhir |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sudhir thank you so much for all of the WOW's, I truly appreciate your kind words. Bonnie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Bonnie...I love the serinity of this piece. Please check your e-mail ![]() Ruth |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
The serinty is captured perfectly here Bonnie!!!.. very nice... |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
A wonderful word painting BSC. A gem. I truly felt myself there. Really beautiful... ![]() |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ruth, Tori & Allan, Thank you all so much for your kind replies, they are so very appreciated. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie I wanna be where you go! This is an awfully serene piece! The closest I get is my own backyard. But that too can be a wonderful place to be! Spent some time in it tonight I did ![]() Your work is alway excellent! I found something out last night...I see you've been a resident poet! I didn't know that! Good going! |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
oooh...! Sounds like a place one should be at!! ![]() ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Becky - I live only a mile from Letchworth State Park, around here it's called the Grand Canyon of the East....it's a beautiful place with 3 separate waterfalls. Thanks for reading, and as always, for your kind reply. Artist - Thanks so much for reading, appreciate the reply. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautifully calming and peaceful scene you painted here Bonnie ... absolutely lovely! Just what I needed to read this morning! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bonnie, I know this place exists You've described it so beautifully and took me there very fine writing Liz |
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