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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-07-31 04:53 PM

Blue are eyes
Watching you move gracefully;
Dark to Light,
Crossing night,
Watching you contentedly;
Shadow’s spark
Eyes in dark,
Seeing her move body and soul;
Through time
Making rhyme,
Repeating words never old.
I love you,
Shadows dark and Eyes are blue.

Here I sit,
Shadows of the past make blue,
No one calls
Passions falls,
In the memories of you,
Only night
Gone the light,
With the movements gone with you.
The past dead,
Eyes turn red,
Crying away tears for you,
I miss you,
Shadows dark and Eyes are blue.

Gloom

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

1 posted 2000-07-31 05:27 PM

so very sad in a nice way Gloom...at least at one time those love feelings were there

~~soft smiles
Maureen

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

2 posted 2000-07-31 05:32 PM

Interesting. Very...interesting.

Just an effigy to be disgraced,
to be defaced.
Your need for me has been replaced.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-07-31 06:02 PM

enjoyed the read yeah I liked this poem, alot.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2000-08-01 05:33 AM

Thank you MMoonchild, Effigy, & brian madden,
I am pleased that you liked my poem,
and took the time to say so.

Gloom

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

5 posted 2000-08-01 09:47 AM

Blue eyes my babys got blue eyes
like the deep blue sea
on a deep blue day

Her eyes follow me
i must leave her now
there is no other way
it is as i fear

I love her now i dissappear
the words in my throat
hurt me more, each beat goes
I must go i love you not

The lies sting
more than most
but i must die
she must go on

Love is fleeting
I am not
my heart has died
my mind set to rot

Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
'Tis

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2000-08-02 07:41 AM

Thank you Walter Poe,
for such a nice poetic response,

Hearken there casting your lot
Watchful eyes;
Surveying all that you got
Waits for the moment to be
Searching eyes;
Caging your motions now free
Predicting your light footfall,
Hidden eyes;
Unknown you won’t even call
For the help that’s not coming,
Hungry eyes;
For your weakness he’s watching,
Evil eyes:
Walking there where you should not.

Eyes are the pools of the soul,
and I think the eyes have gotten these responses.

Gloom

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

7 posted 2000-08-02 07:48 AM

a very nice piece indeed! "seeing her move body and soul".............beautifully said.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

8 posted 2000-08-03 05:49 AM

Thank you very much, poutprincess,
I am pleased that you like it.

Gloom

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

9 posted 2000-08-03 05:52 AM

Beautiful writings..well done

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

10 posted 2000-08-03 05:53 AM

Prof....
        This is a work of art....sad, tender,
        and everything that a relationship
        can be. I loved it!!!!!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

11 posted 2000-08-03 02:06 PM

Thank you, I am pleased you like my words,
sad and tender is the story of my relationships.

Gloom

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2000-08-03 03:09 PM

sad though it is, well written it remains...

P.Gloom, I, for one, liked reading this poem

regards,
sudhir

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

13 posted 2000-08-03 04:11 PM

I really enjoyed the unique style here, very refreshing... Those small lines saying a lot.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

14 posted 2000-08-03 05:32 PM

Thanks Allan,
I like the shorter lines,
breaking up the thoughts to consise bits.

Gloom

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

15 posted 2000-08-03 06:11 PM

This is poignant and lovely, I like the rythym.

Welcome to Passions, btw!

Corinne

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

16 posted 2000-08-03 10:04 PM

Thank you Corinne
rhyme and meter are important in my poetry,
Glad you enjoyed my words.

Gloom

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2000-08-04 05:05 PM

You have described it precisely...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2004-05-02 07:50 PM

incredible!

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