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The Dance---Repost from Dark Passions #1
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The Dance---Repost from Dark Passions #1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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You said that you loved me, You said that there was no one else, Now I find that you have lied to me If only to protect me from myself. This is my heart, Do you see it? This is it here in my hand It's been bruised and battered and torn apart But yet, I gave it to you In the hope of a new start. And what did you do? Professed your love for me and my heart Said that you couldn't live without us But yet. . . but yet. . . The dance is over, and now he's come back To take his place as your partner But I took you away, I sailed with you on The dance floor, Swept you away on a wind of music and melody Yes, my love, I took you to places that you had never seen And will never see again As he dances with you off into the sunset Remember me and never forget Never forget that our steps were in time and that ours was indeed A dance of love. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sorrow speaks in most eloquent ways... What an outlook on the event...what deep thoughts... Sir Sven, I am honoured to read this poem... regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ This is soo sad and I could feel the sorrow and loneliness in it. Hugs to you my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
What could bring such sadness to such a Knight as brave as Sir Sven?? Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brave heart, take thee yet a chance and fling it back in face of romance so, soo good! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friend. . . Sometimes, you just have to. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a poignant piece, Sven. I liked this expecially... "This is my heart, Do you see it? This is it here in my hand"  ...chanson~~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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