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It Mends
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It Mends |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
It Mends the pain the pain the pain rains it pours it drains the want the want the want haunts it consumes it taunts the fear the fear the fear tears it shakes it sears the need the need the need bleeds it maddens it feeds the end the end the end wends it nears it mends Steve B Aug 2000 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's true..time will cure the hurt. Great style and good content....welcome to Passions! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You are stylin' in this.....I loved it. And you are so right it mends.....just sometimes takes a while to get there.  Jenn E |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
ethome- thanks for the great comments.. much appreciated.... Steve B Jenn E- So glad you enjoyed..thank you *S* Steve B |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Steve..... I like your style!! This is a great piece and I just enjoy the way it flows so easily.. Nice writing!! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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