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Open Poetry #9

Dreamless Sleeper

Artistic
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY

0 posted 2000-08-10 12:44 PM

Dreamless sleeper
Tossing about so
Searching vainly
For the tendrils of a dream

Unable to find any
The dreamless sleeps fitfully
As the darkness closes in

______________

~Artistic~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-08-10 10:55 AM

I like the concept, Artistic. Most definitely. As everybody well knows...lol.

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-08-10 10:57 AM

"Searching vainly
For the tendrils of a dream"

...what a lovely line. I enjoyed this

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-08-10 12:55 PM

Artistic..
          Ah, yes....sleep is so much easier
              with a dream or two tossed in!

                  Great job here!!

I have only one goal
in life..
It Is:
To have more than
one goal in
Life!!
~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-08-10 01:02 PM

Nice follow up to "A DREAM". Sleep itself is a chore without the comforts of a dream to quiet us. Wonderful write. Glad to see you making your mark upon us.

Artistic
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY

5 posted 2000-08-10 05:46 PM

Serenity, Claire, Sunny and Mark... thank you all! Sunny, still enjoying your poems as always!

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau

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