Open Poetry #9 |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
When you use to hold me, It was so sweet, You wouldn't let go of me. When I was upset you'd hug me You'd hug me until you seen a smile You'd say "it's okay". I loved it I didn't want it to end I'd smile you'd smile I'm so happy I met you. I crawled out of my shell You helped me by leading me Now my shell is broken. I remember last year I was so shy but so in love I wanted that hug. Then when I went home I was sad Cause I didn't see you I saw you that Friday. On Monday I saw you again I could of jumped out of my wheelchair I couldn't wait to be in your arms. Now it's almost time for us to go back I'll be homesick but you'll help me And I'll be happy when I see you. I hope I don't fall out of my wheelchair But you'll see this smile on my face You'll be happy I'll be happy. I won't know what to say Last year I said is this true? It was I was shaking. I wanted to go home where I had been But you said Come here Minna I was in your arms. But you know what? Poems come to the end So I love you Dave Love Always ~*~Minna~*~ ![]() |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very sentimental poem, Fairy Princess... hope to see more poems from you... regards, sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i think you tugged every string on my heart - I think Dave is a lucky man |
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