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Open Poetry #9

Swing Your Hips

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-08-09 01:06 AM

Swing your hips
Come on
Don’t be shy
The room is dark
Lit only by
A dozen eyes
And lust
Swing your hips
Your body
Already
Says
You must
Your toes are tapping
The bar stool
Is empty
Did you know
You were
On fire
In motion
With the seemless
Release
Of a song
That just rips
The bandage
Takes the pain
Away
With one last
Scream
Swing your hips

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-09-2000).]

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-08-09 01:20 AM

been out on the town walt???

Someone take yuh for yuhr birthday??
This is good stuff here btw

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

2 posted 2000-08-09 02:09 AM

Swinging your hips.......hotpants.......I think we all need to be hangin out with you. Whew! YOu are a refreshing poet indeed, I like your style, so nice to read.

Jenn E

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-08-09 07:38 AM

Hehehe Walt, Lets PARTYYYY YAY!
Loved this Bro!

Well Done

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-08-09 10:47 AM

My gosh, Walt, this was pretty intense...somebody must have popped out of your birthday cake...a different style for you, but I liked this very much!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2000-08-10 02:10 AM

just gettin home from the wild party yuh hiccup

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