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Passing Days
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Passing Days |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The day has past, yes it is done One less to live, one less to love Tomorrow brings a new sunshine The smell of the air, warmth of desire To wake with a need, motivation to live To sense what you’re feeling To feel what you give It takes only a moment to stop and to see How strong I feel for you my sweet Cherie Sometimes it not easy to put into words Your hearts warm desires, to wake in your arms To see you first thing when I wake in the day To kiss you before I go on my way To eat in a restaurant, dance in a bar To kiss while I drive, make love on the floor Without any ponder, without any thought I could do this all night, No words to be sought I’ll close my eyes for a new day I’ll wait One more chance to see you Melt into you all the way So with this pen I’ll end this rhyme With feelings and dreams of this moment in thyme [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Spiked, This piece even "felt" lovely to read, as though it were written with the pen of sincerity. So nice! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Claire it was written from deep down. Rich |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
I feel very mush the same way towards my boyfriend. Your poem nicely embodies how I feel towards. Great work  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you JnR4eva Rich |
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