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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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Do angels dance on firefly wings? Do flowers thank the rain? Do rainbows ever look at their own reflection? Does summer push the spring away Does thunder know it sounds that way Is lightening jealous of the noise it makes? Can true love really never die? in all the world i wonder why if love is so strong why do we say it's a fragile thing? It wants to dance to it's own music and thank the sky above never even notices how deep and true it is It never pushes or pulls speaks louder than words than a storm above I don't think it's a fragile thing at all It's gentle as a breeze than can bring you to your knees in one breath so I don't think love knows the meaning of death [This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Redwriter1~ This is fantastic!  I can't think of a title but it sounds to me like Strong Love. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like this too...how abt...Undetected Strength |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wowowowow great poem... Love Learns? i dunno great poem tho |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Wowwwwwwwwww I like this one a lot It wants to dance to it's own music and thank the sky above never even notices how deep and true it is It never pushes or pulls speaks louder than words than a storm above I don't think it's a fragile thing at all It's gentle as a breeze than can bring you to your knees in one breath so I don't think love knows the meaning of death The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like this poem...some interesting thoughts...I suggest "Love Knows". James |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely Poem Redwriter Love Is That is pretty much it I think. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Great poem....excellent expressions..i like the way it makes you stop and think... a title.....Love in the Dark "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
You are all so very kind to listen to my babbling.. Warms my heart.. and makes me want to write more... just knowing I make any sense at all. thank you........... sincerely Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
How about.. undying love? Geesh now, im answering my own posts.. hahahah Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
morning songwriter ... you might want to check out T McCoy ... he has a knack for song writing as well you might want to try some of your own words for a title here It's a Fragile Thing? Rex |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Redwriter, this is beautiful. I'm think how about the...The Strength Of Gentle Love. Love the poem no matter the title though. Take care, Juls |
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