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The Outlaw of Torn
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The Outlaw of Torn |
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Torn New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 9Williamson |
My second post, hope you like it! The Outlaw of Torn And I've waited my whole lifetime For you I've rode the dirt, I've rode the tide For you I search the outside,I search inside For you To take back what you left me I know I'll always burn to be The one who seeks so I may find And I've waited my whole lifetime So I still wait my whole lifetime For you The more I search the more I need For you The more I bless the more I bleed For you You make me smash the clock and feel I'd rather die behind the wheel Time was never on my side So on I wait my whole lifetime Outlaw of Torn And I'm Torn It tears me and I bleed Hear me And if I close my mind in fear Please pry it open See me And if my face becomes sincere, beware Hold me And when I start to come undone Stich me togather Save me And when you see me strut remind me of what left this outlaw torn. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Torn.... Boy, I loved the line: "..if I close my mind in fear, please pry it open.." That is great writing! I'll be looking for more!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it gave me a real sense of inner refection. Keep up the awesome poetry! |
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