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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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~I wrote this for my daughter Courtney.......~ Cherished in every form Our love like no other United in sacred bond Real love dignified True lessons taught Nurtured and adored Enchanted soul Young and Innocent ....With my eyes watching you every step of the way..... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i know how much love you have for courtney and how much she has for you...and as beautiful as this poem is...i know it is only a small slice of the overwhelming love shared between you both. your daughter is proud to have you for a mom...and im proud to have you as my best friend. whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, I dont think I could ever possibly show either courtney or you how much joy and happiness you bring into my life. You have both taught me the best lessons in life and I respect both of you for doing that. Thankyou for being a part of me!~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beth-This is wonderful and very nurturing within itself....the days of our children are captured mostly in memory and each second we spend with them guides them to their place in life. The importance of noticing all the little things bring about as much into their lives as all the larger lessons we give. Your love for her shines brightly.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a wonderfully penned poem this one, Beth... It oozes with motherly love... regards, sudhir |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Mark, To me, it is the smaller things that makes our love shine brighter...the way we can sit for hours talking, to the way she holds my hand. Thankyou dearly~ ~Sudhir, You don't know what it means to have a reply from you. I admire you as a poet and a friend and it has certainly brightened my day to have both you and mark reply to me. Thankyou so very much~ |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
i've got to agree with Sudhir... it's so great and sometimes so sad watching them grow... Tony |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very nice poem.....and that is so true...we do watch our chidren every step of the way.. Good writing,,,, Julie :) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is such a lovely refection of the bonds and love between you, and it is so true, we do watch them every step of the way. What a lovely treasure this poem will always be Liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh Beth, this is very sweet, and you make sure that you keep an eye on her! Just great! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very sweet. Children are very special indeed. Deb BloomingRose |
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