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heartacheguy New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 3 |
this is a poem that i am writing,this is a true story,there is this girl who i am friends with but she always hurts me why do you always hurt me?? why do you make me cry inside?? why does my heart ache everyday?? i always stood by your side i always wiped the tears away i always made you smile when you were feeling down i never tried to act selfish towards anything you do i always tried to be your friend but you never felt the same way like i do i always wanted to spend time and have fun with you but you always dissapointed me i always felt good about myself when im around you but you never wanted to open your heart to me thats why i feel so heartbroken because you always hurt me. i know this is a second poem that i wrote i feel so emmotional writing this my heart is broken and i feel like i dunno this is making me feel real sad right now |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sometimes there has to be pain to see what is really real...she doesnt know what she is giving up and she never will...welcome to Passions never say never |
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Torn New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 9Williamson |
This girl dosnet know how good you are to her, this is a great poem. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I feel for you, I do. Please know, somewhere in this world is your soulmate, who will give everything back in return, naturally, as she will love you for only you and the hapiness you bring to her. Jenn E |
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