Open Poetry #9 |
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I Wish You a Moonbeam |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
I Wish You a Moonbeam I wish you a moon beam, I wish you a star May happiness be there wherever you are I wish you a life time of joy and of love And all of the things you’ve been dreaming of I wish you success and a brilliant career I wish you great accolades year after year May you always find purpose in that which you do And may a sense of fulfillment be waiting for you I wish you contentment each day of the year And a handful of loved ones holding you near May you discover life’s purpose reflect in their eyes May you sing them to sleep with sweet soft lullabies May each day start with sunshine and end peacefully May you stop every now and then, remembering me Elizabeth Santos |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Liz ... OK, so how many favorites do I have of yours already ... my baskets getting full! Keep them coming, you know I love them so. This was just beautiful, something that you could present to a special someone on so many occassions ... beautiful sentiments Liz! ![]() Best wishes me twin, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I find your poetry wonderful, and this one's another on the list ![]() |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful as always Liz!! ~Kelly ![]() You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kit, Yes it's kind of a generic poem, now that you meantion it. Could be for a lot of different people. But you know what I meant! Thanks, my twin Lakewalker, Thank you for your kind comment Kelly, Thank you Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Elizabeth, What a warm, loving and caring poem! I love it as always ![]() rosepetals |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This would be a great poem to submit to the main site...alot of people would find it meaningful and want to send it to someone special....and that's what I think! Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ditto what Martie said... wonderful heartfilled wishes of lifes sweetest offerings... from our sweetest poet see how well that worked out *smile* love ya Lizzie-gator jm |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great poem...catchy title by the way. very sweet and truely precious. salooma |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ I'll see that moonbeam - and raise you a star ! ![]() Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I love your poems, impossible to pick a fav...this was so tender and true, I really enjoyed it. ![]() Jenn E |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to stop by every now and then because I remember you and the wonderful words you can put together in verse.....always such a beautiful touch of humanity in your work Elizabeth, this is no exception...I wish you a moonbeam that will keep carrying these wonderful poetic ideas to you. Then I wish you my desire to read the results. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! beautiful indeed! regards, sudhir |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
This poem gives me so much courage, Liz.. I will remember it whenever I feel frustrated - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
such beautiful sentiments...How could we possibly forget you..hehe "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I agree with everyone above. This is great |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful poem... it created a beautiful picture in my mind. One of the best i've read in a while. ![]() "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, dear Liz....and I wish the same for you ![]() |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
only you ES could come up with a wish so beautifully penned ... an easy read ... loved it ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your beautiful replies to this poem. You warm my heart Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liz I want that life of joy and love that you speak of...I receive it...my hope, my desire, my dream...precious thoughs...James |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Liz... what a piece! (as usual!) All I can do is wish that you recieve all the great things you have written about. ![]() "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful! It really speaks from the heart. Deb Blooming Rose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautiful poetry. wonderfully written. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Liz...loved it ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful wishes and poem, of course! ![]() Denise |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Liz, Your one of my most favorite moonbeams... I haven't had much time to write or post as we're readying two of our houses for selling. Just got back from our 4th. camping out this year with the kids. Send you an "e" update. We have everything you've ever posted here at Passions and also a few other sites where you've posted, all on CD Rom. I have only one of you and your husband's pics. Do you think I could get a bio..? much much love and prayers from us both. The "lucky keeper" Dale |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, I hope your life will be fullfilled with all you wish for Love Bug, I have them all Deb, Thank you so much Mike, Thanks, dear friend for your nice comments Mareen, Keep smiling Denise, Thank you, dear Lucky, You have my poems on CD?. I don't even have them that organised. Thank you for your kind response Liz |
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