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guiliano
New Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 8
new york city

0 posted 2000-08-06 06:50 PM

Run with me.....

c'mon baby, take my hand....
and let's run, run with me, girl....
chasing our innocence stolen by
a wasted world smothering our feet
racing time's rolling pendulum swing
our youth tumbling into an open deep sea
wake up girl, take my heart ,
you've owned from the start
and run with me
to the mountains where our love
will rock free, climb so high
we can die in the deep blue sky
exchanging our soft feathered wild eyes
no disguise, c'mon girl take my hand
and run with me.....
to the desert of the ancient tribe
honor the spirit guides
learn from the lands vibes
love each other in our own sand castle
prince and princess water and wine
all the sands of time
run with me girl
to the ocean waves
walk the beach hands held tight
swooning love under bright moonlite
make high wild love over our breaking waves naked wash
run with me to the woods
I ache you chase you between the forest playful maze
furry creatures your maddening smiles
make me natural wild child
naked we dance make love romance
I catch you playfully gaze in your eyes
we have chased our lost innocence
and have captured it again
for ours it was to outrun
girl, run with me......

"Takes it easy, baby
Take it as it comes
Don't move too fast
And you want your love to last
Oh, you've been movin' much too fast"=(The Doors)

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-08-06 07:19 PM

Hi guiliano...
             This one could take the breath
         away, in more ways than one!!!!!!!
                I thoroughly enjoyed every
            word, and the images, especially
                     the images!!!!!!
                  Very nice, very, very
                         nice........

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2000-08-06 07:37 PM

guiliano,

"to the mountains where our love
will rock free, climb so high
we can die in the deep blue sky
exchanging our soft feathered wild eyes
no disguise, c'mon girl take my hand
and run with me....."

I liked this very very much. Beautiful imagery!
I looooove the "feathered wild eyes"!
rosepetals25

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-06-2000).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-08-06 07:50 PM

"we have chased our lost innocence
   and have captured it again
      for ours it was to outrun"

What a wonderful poem Guiliano!  Beautiful phrasing and lovely sentiments.  This brings such whimsical and delightful images to mind ... very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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