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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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A Young Girls life Shattered into A million pieces Her innocence taken Forcing her to grow up Way faster than she should Missing the small childhood joys Every child has a given right to have And now as she struggles to find all the Many different small pieces of her broken life Trying to repair the damage done, one piece at a time She stands with her head up high, knowing she will be ok Having undying faith in the strong love that surrounds her being And the peace and happiness she knows she will find, one day at a time. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi rosepetals, You are simple amazing. An excellent poet writing with your heart, different styles of formatting, and words that I can't find the words to describe. Goodness girl, when is the next one coming out? |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rose, I don't know what happened to the littel girl that hurt her so but I remember something happened to me when I was younger, it took some time in fact many years before I could fully put the past behind me. A wonderfully written poem. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely vision of hope and the pyramid is the perfect structure to show the growth of one day and one step at a time. wonderful and promising....  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I wasn't sure if I was going to post this poem... it is very personal.. but I'm glad I did. Bill - Thank you soo much. I have complete respect and think highly of your writing. I'm so proud that you think the same of me. Thank you. brian - Childhood scars are the hardest to bare. I'm still struggling with it everyday... but.. I'm slowly getting better and stronger. Thank you for your compliments. Mark - Aww.. you always such nice things  Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ The strength of your structure lies in the very foundation of your soul. You have shown a tender awareness to get beyond the entrapment of childhood terror. Lovely heart-rendering statements. Be proud - be happy ! One small step at a time - forward you go ! Forward ever - backward never within yourself - your future lies. And a *hug* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was very touching Rosepetals. Such sadness, and yet what a wonderfully positive feel I am left with, that there is light and hope in the future. Very nicely penned and a lovely format that compliments your thoughts so well. Best wishes, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - Thank you for your words of inspiration. I greatly appreciate them Kit - I'm glad you liked it Kit. Thanks for stopping into read |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
What can I say!! Love it, Love it, Love it!!!!!! Simply awesome... and that whole shape thing is soo cool  This is wonderfull! Keep it up! ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lil One - Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it |
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