Open Poetry #9 |
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I know |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I know, the heart that features great inside of souls lost portrait. I know, how you act when touched in secret places I have found. I know, the sweet kisses you envoke to remind me my soul is yours I know, all my heart you do keep in shadows mystic minds we weep. I know, of decisions that you had to make that kept you from your soul mate. I know, of what that meant to you to try once more, to kindle anew. I know, your heart does break but mends itself with every beat. I know, you question this and more how can God create this chore. I know, that you weep at night for things that could have, if we might. I know, the will it takes to keep this love for both our sakes. I know, this passions breaks through everything to give us faith to both our lives. I know, your love for me is deeper still than oceans depth, or skies are blue. I know, and yes I understand, yet I question Gods great plan. And when, the stars do go from my heart heavens shall rage to keep us one. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How very touching...this is beautiful never say never |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
I saw the title and instantly had to read. I did this for my website recently, and will drop it here at the moment with apology for the similarity. I'm new to this forum, so even unconsciously tis doubtful we ever read each other before. Very nicely written! Anyway... I Know... I watch you sleeping and I know the first touch on your skin should be my own. I watch you stir from sleep and I know the first kiss on your lips will be for me alone. I watch your eyes open and I know that sighed slow hint of smile is for my eyes alone. I watch your lips part and I know the warmth of your mouth will lead me on. I watch your eyes close and I know within your heart I have found a place to call my own. EWDrake © 5/2000 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I know" this is absolutely beautiful Michael, for I heard an audible sigh escape me at the end ... longing and yearning floats powerfully through your words! Nicely penned! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I know.....Oh How I know. Sometimes I know not what to say to you just how to say it. This was beautiful. From my heart to yours. Perfectly penned! As Always, Jenn E |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I know how you feel!!!!!!! ![]() ![]() |
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