Open Poetry #9 |
In The Coming Days |
Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
I look at you laying in front of the fire, I get filled With an outburst of desire. I want to kiss your soft lips again, I remember What you said back then. How you thought I was so strong, To kiss you without warning How you thought we belong. The way you talked with such ease, Holding me Prepared to please. The way you held my hand, Eager to deliver And kind of demand. You asked me why I chose you, And I blushed, I knew I couldnt lie to you. I said it was your kind and caring ways, How I had thought of you, And I still would in the coming days. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Beth.... I really like this one.....it's tender and easy on the heart...... Very nicely done, as always!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very sensual and romantic.. enjoyed reading |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny, Thankyou so much. Im glad you liked it~ ~Rosebud, Thankyou deeply~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Really soft sensuality here Beth.....loved it much. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
woo-hoo titania (giggle)! looks like youve been sprinklin that fairy dust again! hahah...this IS very sensual...loved it! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Mark, Thankyou dearly. I was hoping I'd get To hear from you!~ ~Dawn, Oh, I have been doing nothing but that hahaha Thanks for your reply~ |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
This was so soft and tender. "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Tess, Thankyou so much for reading~ |
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