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Snakebit |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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A comment said But just in jest A lingering thought In the mind to fest. Engulf you in This world of mine Introduce you to My thoughts sublime. Capture all You feel and see Consume you in This hell that’s me There’s no escape Your will is gone I creep through you From dusk till dawn So keep your strength And use it when The snakebites gone And I bite again For with each turn There starts anew Feel me as I slide around you And I look real deep Into your eyes Hypnotic trance That tells no lies It tells me all I need to know I feel you melt You try to go So lie there gently On my chest Slide your nails Show your unrest This tease has taken you Far beyond That which you Had envisioned True seduction Is just the sequenced rhythm Of two hearts That beat as one. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this one....time for voodoo...serenity's snake dance...grins to you...hugs. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Capture all You feel and see Consume you in This hell that’s me =================== This tease has taken you Far beyond That which you Had envisioned True seduction Is just the sequenced rhythm Of two hearts That beat as one. ================== oooooh i love this cryptic spell of a poem very very cool... excellent words choices and phrasing .. enjoyed this muchly and i dont know about you Rich... but I'd pay money to see Sen do that dance  later-snake-eyes-gators jm |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Serenity will expect you to hold true to the snake dance lol Thanks and JM If you'd like I can charge admission thank you both very much Rich |
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