Open Poetry #9 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people ![]() |
Friend That dreaded day of death is here and I sit and listen while I cry at the emptyness in my heart and soul not knowing why she had to die It came so sudden, It came so soon my life left with her last breath and we were gone, would never return then it stuck me: this is death. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
death reaches out to all and it never seems to be the right moment...heartfelt write LW ~~soft hugs and Welcome Maureen |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lakewalker, The death of a friend is so hard to bare. This poem brings memories of the past rememinded me of friends I have lost. I look forward to seeing more of your poems. rosepetals25 |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very moving writing, Lakewalker. The realization of death is sometimes so disturbingly sudden, and the feeling that we are gone too is very real. I know this feeling. Thank you for sharing this here. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such sadness in your words...if this is about your friend, I'm so sorry for your loss. Welcome to our family. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks everyone, I appreciate this warm welcome ![]() Lakewalker |
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