Open Poetry #9 |
Velvet Reflections (His/Hers) |
EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Velvet Cravings Darkness descends into silken night, tracing with prickles of pleasure as desire edges the day from her mind. In anticipation of his promised return, wistful images of moments past caress her senses and make her blush. Eyes downcast as if demure, the inner flush she wishes to deny. Yet the gentle brush of memory creeps warmly up her inner thighs, conquering her will to resist. Slipping fingers between damp thighs, in the ready warmth she knows her desire. From moistened depths the sound alone whispers of her soft velvet craving. With wordless sigh her lips part as a slow aching whimper escapes. In answer her inner need warmly swells to soften the way for his loving intent, while her soul draws him ever near. The door opens as his smile appears. Hazel eyes look up to meet his own as the rush of heat swallows her whole, she wonders if he could truly ever know. Familiar Paths Anticipating her awaiting warmth, he opens the door and feels the ever familiar pull as he finds hazel eyes looking up into his own. Unwrapping his towel, he slips into sheets folded back and into her reaching arms. Lips seek the flavour of salty sweet skin as it warms beneath kisses offered with full focus and intent. The barest brush of his warm breath on her neck awakens inner need to blaze with passion's fire till the quiet of night embraces and creates a haven cloaked in covers as the world passes unknownst by. In darkness, explorations follow her favourite route. Paths once learned timidly lay in longing till the caress of her calf along his thigh invites both mind and soul to follow. Nature's rhythm meets the music found in memory as his hunger leads the way to sated joy. Then he settles in shadows as the scent of loving lulls his senses; sighs turn to whispers as the quiet of night seeps in. The taste of her desire lingers on his lips as a gentle kiss good night reminds her of intimacy so recently shared. While dreams beckon, he wraps her in his arms and wonders if she could possibly ever know. EWDrake © 2000 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOOOHH MY...and I am supposed to sleep now? never say never |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Of course thou art! In the humbled hold of serenity, no less! I assume that means you liked, Thank you, Evan |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
extremely well written. good job. Unrequited love sucks. |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Well done. --Chibi |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
beowulf and chibi, thanks for dropping in to read. I appreciate the kind words. EWB |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Love this..and well having hazel eyes..you kow what that does to me to read a poem that mentions them even if not mine...you write with heart, EW ~~softly Maureen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh My......this was delicious!! This has never come home to me....I think I'm moving Great writing!! |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Thank you, hazel-eyed moonchild. I'm very glad you liked it. The eyes are oh so very important, though spectral hue truly matters far less than intensity of gaze... Take care, Evan |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Butterfly, be still fluttering one, I do believe it more a matter of attitude that lattitude... I'm glad you liked, EWD |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yet the gentle brush of memory creeps warmly up her inner thighs, conquering her will to resist. Slipping fingers between damp thighs, in the ready warmth she knows her desire. From moistened depths the sound alone whispers of her soft velvet craving. With wordless sigh her lips part as a slow aching whimper escapes. In answer her inner need warmly swells to soften the way for his loving intent, while her soul draws him ever near. ================== Unwrapping his towel, he slips into sheets folded back and into her reaching arms. Lips seek the flavour of salty sweet skin as it warms beneath kisses offered with full focus and intent. The barest brush of his warm breath on her neck awakens inner need to blaze with passion's fire till the quiet of night embraces and creates a haven cloaked in covers as the world passes unknownst by. In darkness, explorations follow her favourite route. Paths once learned timidly lay in longing till the caress of her calf along his thigh invites both mind and soul to follow. Nature's rhythm meets the music found in memory as his hunger leads the way to sated joy. Then he settles in shadows as the scent of loving lulls his senses; sighs turn to whispers as the quiet of night seeps in. The taste of her desire lingers on his lips as a gentle kiss good night reminds her of intimacy so recently shared. ================== OH MAN!!!!!!!!!!! I think I'm gonna need oxygen... amazing depth of sensuality and emotion here... my my my this was a pleasure to read absolutely exquisite and breathtaking most impressive writing take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
JM, You honour me, m'lady. Thank you for reading me so consistently and always having an encouraging word. Evan With a long held breath given dark freedom, the single flame in sorrow's window flickers out. ~EWD~ |
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AnabelleBlue Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 28NM, USA |
There is nothing so exquisitely sensual as the anticipation of making love with someone with whom you share both affection and chemistry. I sensed the desire in her eyes when he removed his towel. Men are so seldom admired openly. Not a mistake I would make. Absolutely wonderful Ana |
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