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Bruce
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since 2000-08-02
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0 posted 2000-08-02 10:42 PM


It’s been a long time
Since I smiled like this
Since I longed to feel
Such a passionate kiss

The warmth of your hand
Holding mine tight
Knowing that this time
It will be all right


Hi. I guess I'm new here so I wanted to say I wrote this for my ex. It's been almost a year and I'm struggling to get back into life again. This seems like a friendly place.

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
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1 posted 2000-08-02 10:45 PM


Welcome to Passions Bruce, yes we are a
pretty friendly bunch    Thank you for
sharing this with us...perhaps through your
own writing and that of others you will find
the healing you are searching for.  Your
poem was full of warmth and hope....both
beautiful things.....I'm looking forward to
more in the future~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-08-02 10:46 PM


Welcome to Passions Bruce ... you found the best place to post and meet new friends here

Rex

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-08-02 10:46 PM


Welcome to Passions Bruce, I think you're gonna like it here!

Sweet poem, full of hope...a nice entrance.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-08-02 10:51 PM


Welcome to Passions, Bruce! Yes, you're going to love it here! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-08-02 11:46 PM


Welcome! We've enough friends to go around!
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6 posted 2000-08-03 12:04 PM


Bruce~
Welcome to 'Vista Nova' -  
A bright new star that will light up your life.

This is the place to be !
The greatest circle of poets and friends
on the entire web ... honest !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
7 posted 2000-08-04 11:29 PM


Hi Bruce,
Welcome, you will like it here. I am new also and it has been great. Can I ask you something? I am not sure if you are writing this for her and starting over or to her about new love you have found? I would really like to know. I loved it either way, sweet and gentle......  
Jenn E

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