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The Gift
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The Gift |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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The GiftYou have given me the gift of love That is so very rare A love that we share so strong Eternity will spent with me by your side So many things I love about you Your tender eyes That see into my soul Submerge me in your sweet love The gentle soothing caresses Of your caring hands My very own safe escape From everything bad in the world The sound of your laughter Flow to my ears Filling me with warmth Making my heart smile with love The feel of your wonderful love Touches me so deep Revives my tired heart Your love makes me a better than I am I’ll show you every day how I feel You make me whole You complete my existence You are my life, soul and passion |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25.... This was beautifully written...a tender tribute to your soul-mate. Well done, my friend!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If your "soul-mate", to quote Sunny1, doesn't like it...send it to me...I love it already! jwesley |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sunny - I'm glad you liked it  Thank you for your nice words.jwesley - ~chuckles~ I will find out later tonight how he likes it I sent it off right after I posted here. I'm glad you liked it  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosepetals25, Another you have done, with meaningful words, and a tenderness that I see in your poems. I'm glad I came by. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I enjoyed reading this great work, it really made me think of the deepness of your love. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - Thank you I'm glad you stopped in too Lakewalker - I'm glad you liked I see this was your first post! Welcome to Passions I look forward to seeing your work. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Rosepetals, What a tender, heartfelt, loving and lovely poem. Your love just shines in this beautiful piece. Bonnie |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
BSC - I appreciate the compliments. Thank you very much |
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