Open Poetry #9 |
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10 Special Things... |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
First comes my girlfriend Jess, She's shy nontheless. Then comes my mom, Shes just da bomb. Daddy comes next in line, His height STILL exceeds mine. Now it's my brother's turn, In his eyes passion does burn. My four dogs have a part in this too, But right now they dont know what to do. Next is my iguana whos eyes and name are both Amber, Look out for her tail DON'T tamper. Next is all my friends around the globe, Flicker together as one like a light called strobe. Now how bout the house I live in, It's not much but it's not a trash bin. The car I drive is a luxury, But the thrill is that of a sting from a bee. Lastly is for the teaches who have taught me, I wrote this in gold, So all of you may see, How these 10 things, Make up MY reality. These are the ten special things in my life. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kyle aka Huck... This was wonderful!! It sounds like you have a full life and are enjoying every minute of it!! That is so cool........too many people forget to appreciate what they have...... This was great..... I hope to read more from you!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey there Huck - gotta agree with Sunny1...sounds like you're loving it. Good for you! Nice piece, too. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kyle~ So YOU ! Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
second place huh? at least Im in front of the dogs LOL never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
ten wonderful things and ten different wonderful ways to explain them as good as I've read.........would you have a mother named Paula who is also a very sweet loving poet??? |
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