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Open Poetry #9

Unbreakable

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2000-08-05 10:46 AM

  The sound of your voice
Whispering your love to me
The feel of your hand
Touching the side of my face
My heart filling with this love
Feelings so tender
Your love renews my spirit
My love for you grows
In my heart body and soul
Love unbreakable and strong.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-08-05 10:52 AM

rosepetals25....

             Oh, I loved the line:

         'Love Unbreakable and strong'

            That just about says it
            all....that's what we all
            desire....and need....

               Beautiful verse here!

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-08-05 11:02 AM

a very beautiful verse.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-08-05 11:36 AM

RosePetals~

'Your love renews my spirit'

Now THAT'S what it's all about !
Lovely render of the heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-08-05 06:19 PM

Rosepetals25,
How did you manage so many heart filled lines in a short poem? Like this one:

The feel of your hand
Touching the side of my face

Talent is what it is.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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5 posted 2000-08-05 07:34 PM

Thank you all soooo much! You kind words mean alot to me coming from such talented poets. They honestly touch my heart. Thank you.

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