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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My soul begins to awaken On this very night I will not be shaken By the brightness of the light The way begins to unfold Right before my eyes A new story will be told That contains no lies I realize my full potential Knowing that my time has come Happiness is now essential Don't have to be numb This is a new beginning To do whatever I desire The clouds are now thinning Since there is no more fire Peace will rule my days Now that you are gone I am tired of your ways Find yourself another pawn ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the strength in this, Lone Wolf. Hugs to you...with much admiration. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah LW  should I hide the light? Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
HUGE hugs for this piece LW.......I hear your ROAR and it is beautiful music to my ears my dear friend!! Love you for this one!!! Take care of YOU!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a new beginning To do whatever I desire The clouds are now thinning Since there is no more fire Peace will rule my days Now that you are gone I am tired of your ways Find yourself another pawn ===================== BAM!!!! POW!!!! somebody get my gator-girl a cape... nevermind...me thinks she just found her wings to fly!!!! perfect poem of empowerment and strength LW way to be girl...  take care sweets jm |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you go!  |
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