Open Poetry #9 |
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Heart to Heart......(for Mark B.) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA ![]() |
I could...................send you a card of fancy......design, and words written by others to express thoughts of mine, but I would rather the words, come straight from my heart, no interference, no prissy parts, only the feelings, inside that I hold, treasured....and.......wrapped in my memories of gold...everyday words and everyday cares...and...everyday memories together to share, I would kiss them in thoughts and breeze them to you, on the wings of the wind on the morning's tears, dew...and if that doesn't touch...the deep within you, I will send them in moonbeams to shine upon two, the one in my heart and the one I wait for...my touching shall travel...'til it reaches your door, as it unlocks with key the treasure that.....hides...as.....my whispering thoughts leave their imprints to guide when the...morning...sun rises..with me in your glance..I'll...be............waiting, I will to join you...................in dance M...............................M M *wanted to show you I could do it...*s |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heart to heart...two hearts together...embracable hearts.. I like the way you wrote this..nice message..James |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ You KNOW I like this ... and Mark will love it too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am certain Mark will like this... Nice work, Maureen... regards sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge and Sudhir...I have been up since 9P.M. last night and it took me until 6 a.m. to respond on here and to write and get this formation correct to show Mark that I use periods instead of spaces to make my patterned poetry... It was written to someone else but demonstrated for Mark.. ~~thanking you both before I eat and go to bed........my eyes actually hurt.. (my aol kept booting me for some illegal operation all night..so I kept losing my posts just as I was about to submit..hmmm that doesn't sound too good ..the submitting and illegal stuff huh...see I am punchy now..goodnight) MM |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maureen-First off...I had no doubt that you could do this and I thank you for your dedication. The poem is lovely and whomever it was written for is one lucky man.....providing that he ever listens. Thanks again and yes you know it will go in my file. ![]() ![]() |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Mark and ocassionally someone does listen to me... ~~soft smiles Maureen.. yours was very hard as it was such a long heart that is why I made mine into two...*S |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
James..sorry I almost forgot you...it's hard lately..not getting enough sleep...thank you for your kind words and for stopping to read my poems ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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