Open Poetry #9 |
Knowing |
Sunshine
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Knowing Adapted, changed soul remains Lost, found soul renown hidden key found in me reflect you given clues strikes me uncertain behind the curtains soul repels given hell BUT souls rejoice given choice. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 4 August 2000 |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I liked it.......my fav is the end.. souls rejoice given choice......Great read. Jenn E |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Jenn! I'm looking for your works! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
how do YOU do it??? that's what I'd like to know..... wish i could write so succinctly... this is a fine piece of writing ... so few words say soooooo so much.... god bless and thank you for a wonderful read |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doreen...I'll trade a page if YOU trade a page!!! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat style...love this type of write from you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I believe I found what I was looking for! |
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