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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-04 01:06 AM


Dew droplets on grass
Shining in the morning sun
Shimmering in beauty




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rosepetals25
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1 posted 2000-08-04 01:11 AM


Ok Ok OK... I just saw that I made a mistake... lol

Dew droplets on grass
Shining in the morning sun
Shimmering in beauty


here is the revised version...

Dew droplets on grass
Shining in the morning sun
Delicate beauty


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2 posted 2000-08-04 03:40 AM


RosePetals~

On sweet morning dew
Shimmering in beauty's mist
Rose Petals of you


~*Marge*~

*Wonderful ....
Aren't these fun ?


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ethome
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3 posted 2000-08-04 03:41 AM


Glad to see you girls have such fun...keep it up..
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4 posted 2000-08-04 03:41 AM


Lovely morning Haiku

Enjoyed
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


ethome
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5 posted 2000-08-04 03:43 AM


Geez Rosepetals I hope you're a girl...I did'nt mean anything otherwise.
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6 posted 2000-09-04 09:12 PM


liked the image portrayed here

Write On!

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7 posted 2000-09-04 09:33 PM


Marge - Yes Haiku are fun.. I looove Haiku and Tanka's Thank you.

ethome -   Thanks for stopping in.. and yes.. I'm female..lolol  

Tracie - I'm glad you enjoyed it

kaile - Thank you for stopping in.  I'm glad you liked it


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